{"author_link":"\/author\/emmelineprufrock\/","author_name":"emmelineprufrock","author_uid":"22454","comments":[{"author_name":"OnlySlightly","author_uid":"1959","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:38pm","epoch":1409009580,"text":"Loved the ending. You are a very talented writer :)"},{"author_name":"Andre Blyth","author_uid":"25463","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 12:09am","epoch":1409011440,"text":"Really nice writing, you set a great mood. And I especially liked the short bit about the crows."},{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 12:12am","epoch":1409011620,"text":"Really good piece. Thank you for writing it.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>My only gripe is that it doesn't break with the default Twine font and layout. But that's superficial I suppose, and the prose itself is quite evocative."},{"author_name":"firstbass","author_uid":"13901","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 12:25am","epoch":1409012400,"text":"Very interesting take on the theme and well written story. You set it all quite elegantly."},{"author_name":"emmelineprufrock","author_uid":"22454","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 3:41am","epoch":1409024160,"text":"@Snoother I normally like to break a bit from default Twine, but got held up the first two days of the jam (most of the reason that it didn't end up a compo entry is that it was written today). I would've liked to see it change more depending on your interactions. I might still work on it. \r<br\/>\r<br\/>Thank you all for your kind words!"},{"author_name":"mechabit","author_uid":"34391","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 2:31pm","epoch":1409063160,"text":"some good writing there, could have done with some more options."},{"author_name":"Thingo Studios","author_uid":"31541","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:43pm","epoch":1409085480,"text":"Into the woods, it's time to go, I hate to leave, I have to though...\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Anyway-- very good atmosphere and good writing. Never sure how to rate text adventures, but this game's pretty darn good."},{"author_name":"vandriver","author_uid":"4241","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 9:01pm","epoch":1409086560,"text":"i ended up with the more magical ending.  i like that it diverges depending on the material in the clicked phrases.  wish more of them altered the story even if just a bit."},{"author_name":"Crowbeak","author_uid":"16689","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 5:44am","epoch":1409117940,"text":"This is interesting. I like the choice of worlds to cross."},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 9:27am","epoch":1409217720,"text":"Good writing.\r<br\/>A bit short. But that's how I write mine too..."},{"author_name":"kristoffer zetterberg","author_uid":"27525","time":"Aug 29, 2014 @ 4:07pm","epoch":1409328120,"text":"nicely written, not just the prose but how you tell the story. spotted one typo at (one of?) the ending\/s: &quot;you never to me that&quot;. should be &quot;told&quot;, i reckon."},{"author_name":"whalebot","author_uid":"36369","time":"Sep 2, 2014 @ 11:46pm","epoch":1409701260,"text":"You're very good at this story telling business..."},{"author_name":"NiceAlexanderAS","author_uid":"7045","time":"Sep 2, 2014 @ 11:51pm","epoch":1409701560,"text":"Wow the style gave it a good mood, Excelente work , the story is awesome! :D"},{"author_name":"ChuiGum","author_uid":"22408","time":"Sep 3, 2014 @ 12:36am","epoch":1409704260,"text":"Great writing, good job!"},{"author_name":"pjchardt","author_uid":"13158","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 7:45pm","epoch":1410810000,"text":"Well crafted, I enjoy your writing style.  I am interested in hearing some sound being used in the experience, even if more abstract than literal, I am curious how it could be crafted and integrated to enhance the experience.  Either way, well done!"}],"images":["ld30\/22454-4a76a0edc6d304dda7949cb58d982267.jpg","ld30\/22454-4a762d27c3945ab3c51f17e244d97e52.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/www.philome.la\/barelyconcealed\/into-the-woods","text":"Web"},{"url":"https:\/\/twitter.com\/barelyconcealed","text":"Twitter"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"17278","g_author":"22454","g_event":"LD30","g_eventkey":"24","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"17307","g_title":"Into the Woods","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"366","g_commentcount":"15","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/22454-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/22454-shot1.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"A short Twine story about growing up, memory, and the collision of two worlds, and the relationship between mothers and daughters. ","title":"Into the Woods"}