{"author_link":"\/author\/marudziik\/","author_name":"marudziik","author_uid":"5431","comments":[{"author_name":"43iscoding","author_uid":"35110","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 1:39pm","epoch":1409060040,"text":"I'm not really into text quests, but I enjoyed this one!"},{"author_name":"ob6160","author_uid":"31367","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 8:19am","epoch":1409127240,"text":"It was really fun :) Like the animated gifs"},{"author_name":"pjimmy","author_uid":"40339","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 1:54pm","epoch":1409147340,"text":"very funny game"},{"author_name":"udo","author_uid":"6821","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 9:17am","epoch":1409217120,"text":"This is promising, I would check out a full version if you decided to do it. :)"},{"author_name":"Calciumtrice","author_uid":"31814","time":"Aug 29, 2014 @ 1:35pm","epoch":1409319000,"text":"What you've got here is really neat. I like the writing and some parts made me chuckle (Yes, YOUR POCKETS). The addition of the pictures is a nice extra incentive to see everything.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>My only suggestion for what's already here would be to make it more likely to take you to the worlds before revisiting ones you've already seen, maybe, as it took a lot of tries with the randomiser to get all nine.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Good stuff. :)"},{"author_name":"kirbytails7","author_uid":"4767","time":"Aug 31, 2014 @ 5:06am","epoch":1409461260,"text":"Very nice. I like the gradual transitions between text and the simple images.\r<br\/>Hard work is never in vain. Remember what you've learned for next time. =) That's what game jams are for!"},{"author_name":"deepnight","author_uid":"2982","time":"Aug 31, 2014 @ 4:38pm","epoch":1409502780,"text":"I've never played a Twine entry, yours is the 1st one :)\r<br\/>The story was compelling and I like a lot the addition of graphic elements from time to time. \r<br\/>Good writing skills!"},{"author_name":"Acuity","author_uid":"34803","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 9:40pm","epoch":1410816900,"text":"This was pretty clever.  I got drunk early."},{"author_name":"ashdnazg","author_uid":"21623","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 9:51pm","epoch":1410817560,"text":"I really enjoyed your entry.\r<br\/>The beginning was well written and your use of the various tools you had like the &quot;line fade in&quot; was very effective.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>A thing that was slightly missing in my opinion was some sense of goal inside the game (not just the meta goal of getting achievements).\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Good job!"},{"author_name":"creative630","author_uid":"8156","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 10:27pm","epoch":1410819720,"text":"Rad, loved the portal hopping story. Went to all 9 places. Missed one achievement :("},{"author_name":"JonathanG","author_uid":"11515","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 10:39pm","epoch":1410820440,"text":"Not bad, but arriving in different worlds at random was a little tedious."},{"author_name":"pikkpoiss","author_uid":"37196","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 11:22pm","epoch":1410823020,"text":"Cool text adventure game. I liked the interactive and changing nature of the text. Would love to play through a full length adventure. Great job!"},{"author_name":"ConflictiveLabs","author_uid":"15810","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 11:30pm","epoch":1410823500,"text":"It was fun, loved the little details like the slow-appearing text, the icons, and using &quot;clickable&quot; labels in the text to interact with the story."},{"author_name":"masterhyjinx","author_uid":"2031","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 11:41pm","epoch":1410824160,"text":"I wasn't expecting this.  It's done very well.  I enjoyed the little graphic pieces once in a while.  The boy in the hut didn't say anything back to me, didn't know if that was a bug or intended.  This could be a very cool little tablet app.  I didn't get to the end but it seemed a bit random near the end about where you'd end up."}],"images":["ld30\/5431-ab458cfa3de7e6d793f3f72fd1bbd1cc.jpg","ld30\/5431-ce5a5c1b29193971baaf516a236feb1a.jpg","ld30\/5431-0a0f2975cdfd558fbf02cc9502a81c21.jpg","ld30\/5431-43c40a5dd62a9756fbeed789bfa0ca46.jpg","ld30\/5431-b004a03116d231c6d2da5a9ca2f1bfa0.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/38899557\/LD30\/ld30marudziik.html","text":"Web"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"16634","g_author":"5431","g_event":"LD30","g_eventkey":"24","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"16663","g_title":"Mage's Tower","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"312","g_commentcount":"14","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/5431-shot0.gif-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/5431-shot1.gif-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/5431-shot2.gif-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/5431-shot3.gif-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/5431-shot4.gif-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"It's a choose-your-own adventure styled game, but it's unfortunately not finished. After you've visited all 9 worlds, and tried to get all achievements (involving repeatable actions), there's not much more to see.\r\n\r\nI'm truly sorry for the incomplete experience. Submitting this only to not see my hard work die in vain - and while I don't think I will continue this story, I might re-use some of this creation in a different game.\r\n\r\nEntering the Jam because I didn't have enough time during the Compo, but obviously that did not help much.\r\n\r\nThe game should be playable on mobiles.\r\n","title":"Mage's Tower"}