13 minutes of light by Jod
Mars is, at best, 13 minutes of light removed from Earth. So when your girlfriend gets on the Commercial Virgin spaceflight to teach at Mars University, you realize the relationship has... a bit of a challenge. Will your penmanship be enough to keep the relationship warm?
Feautures:
-Writing letters to your beloved!
-Jealousy!
-/r/mars
-War
-Peace
-Cheeky girlfriend(s)
-Viserys (the cat, not the dragon)
-Ron
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A Visual Novel where I step outside my comfort zone and try writing a romance story. Not to worry, though, there's still violence and mass-murder somewhere in the background.
Written in Ren'py in about 40 hours. Pictures were made with my S4 and manipulated in Paint.net and with false promises. Music was put together with Fruityloops. Fonts are from Google Fonts
Feautures:
-Writing letters to your beloved!
-Jealousy!
-/r/mars
-War
-Peace
-Cheeky girlfriend(s)
-Viserys (the cat, not the dragon)
-Ron
########################################################
A Visual Novel where I step outside my comfort zone and try writing a romance story. Not to worry, though, there's still violence and mass-murder somewhere in the background.
Written in Ren'py in about 40 hours. Pictures were made with my S4 and manipulated in Paint.net and with false promises. Music was put together with Fruityloops. Fonts are from Google Fonts
Ratings
| Coolness | 71% | 3 |
| Overall | 4.09 | 21 |
| Audio | 3.34 | 204 |
| Fun | 3.60 | 148 |
| Graphics | 3.68 | 215 |
| Humor | 3.53 | 65 |
| Innovation | 3.93 | 87 |
| Mood | 4.29 | 7 |
| Theme | 4.16 | 24 |
As for.. uhm, not actually using a USB-device or the other, uhm... Yeah. You got me there. I just like letters, I guess. :)
OK, got throught the end, and OMG. Please tell me there's a way to get Liz back.
It might not be so easy to "sell" a mostly-textual adventure in a LD contest.
4sap: Thanks! And yes, Space radiation. Damn that space radiation, forcing us to write letters! ;)
I'ts also nice to see so many features in the menu, like
changing the text speed and saving, especially in a ludum
dare game.
The story was wonderful and really well told through. And the letter mechanic worked extremely well, both through the varied choices and the ability to glimpse at the effect of said choices. I also loved the detail that went into the political backdrop and all the various reddit posts. It kind of even works as an anti-war polemic, but it's a romance at its core, and you've done that very well. The characters are very much believable and the romance was almost tangible. Really fabulous entry -- dare I say the best I've played yet. (And I haven't even mentioned how good the graphics and music are. Sorry, this entry has got me really excited. It's exactly the type of game I wanted to play this LD.)
Are you sure you created all the content? Some pictures look like filtered photos.
Extremely impressive peace of work and writing, considering the time. My first 5/5 overall for this LD. I will probably return to it and try it again later.
There are a lot of good ideas here, the colored sentences in each letters felt a bit artificial but it was interesting anyway. The reddit screens were the best! A great way to express the time.
You might want to try my own game because it is quite similar in a way (I mean in the variables gives epilogue mechanics)
The musical vignettes are cool, but maybe a little loud and don't quite match in tone.
Thanks for making this!
The concept sounded a bit like Hoshi no Koe (Makoto Shinaki) but its works thanks to the humor and the interactivity. I really liked your entry but I wish there would be more content to the endings (I read 2 and there weren't many differencies between them).
Best of luck in the ratings :)