P.I. by burlapjack

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made by burlapjack for LD31 (JAM)
P.I. is a story about a private investigator after a case gone bad. The main character finds his p.i. office surrounded by those who he plans to bring to justice and must fight to survive.

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mmoustafa
09. Dec 2014 · 05:59 UTC
This game feels like it has potential, but there's definitely a lot of room for improvement.

It gets very repetitive fairly quickly. Perhaps having the enemies come from more doors, (and having different kinds of enemies. Maybe give him limited ammo so the game isn't so easy?)

A little polish goes a long way. Having the enemies flash white instead of just disappearing can make the game feel a lot better.

This is a great presentation to look at about how adding these little tricks to a game (especially a shooter) can make a huge difference! Start at around the 7 minute mark https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJdEqssNZ-U
BlueTheLemon
09. Dec 2014 · 20:13 UTC
Congratulation for making this game !
Can't say anything more than Mmoustafa ! SFX would have added a lot. Great work !
dieblume86
10. Dec 2014 · 09:25 UTC
Nice start.
Sanguine
12. Dec 2014 · 21:56 UTC
I'm gonna agree with mmoustafa. The game already had an interesting mood though, and you could definitely play with that some more :)
SuperDisk
12. Dec 2014 · 22:02 UTC
Yeah, it does have potential. I thought it was hilarious that those mobsters must have brought a freakin' parade to this guy's office, and the only logical thing for him to do is just mow them down (with a pistol, no less.)

Humor 5/5, if not unintentionally. :)